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haiku contest entry
haiku (you're my better half) by Lobber
3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry

you're my "better half"
much better than "half of me"
but “split” we are no better

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Author Notes
Original Description:
JK + GS + Canada - USA = LOVE

Original Title: A Simple Formula For Love

Contest Rules:
Write a poem that has a syllable count of either 5-7-5 or 5-7-7.
It does not rhyme.
But the poem must address a loved one, like . . Joe, you are the heartbeat of my life

     

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