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: A Wind in the Treetops by estory

She once said that she thought that she could hear
My feelings
And our love,
As if in a dream,
Seemed like a whole other world
Caught up in the moment
Like a bird in the morning.

It is true:

Among lovers,
One hears another's heart beating,
And the wind in the treetops
Like music;

The sound of her head
Cradled like a crystal ball
In my hand.

Author Notes
This is a more romantic poem, done in an open, free verse style, much like the wind in the treetops itself. I wanted images that spoke of dreams, of clairvoyance, of the intertwined relationship in a mystic, magical sense. That feeling of knowing what someone feels without saying it. estory

     

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