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5-7-5 Suite: The Mind
Haiku and Senryu Suites
: Do You Mind? by Badger_29
"We are shaped by our thoughts; we become what we think. When the mind is pure, joy follows like a shadow that never leaves" Buddha
Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at FanArtReview.com

 studying the mind,
 there are many rooms to find
fearfully designed

 sensory data
 collected then inspected
 everything is stored

 the memory banks
 retain this information,
 but we forget most

 the neural pathways 
become more accessible
by repeating
 things
 
 so if you don't mind,
 I will try to remember
 to thank your reviews
 

Author Notes
Psalms. 139:13 For thou hast possessed my reins: thou hast covered me in my mother's womb.
139:14 I will praise thee; for I am fearfully and wonderfully made: marvellous are thy works; and that my soul knoweth right well.

I would like to thank
Renate-Bertodi fanart. Com for the expressive artwork, I chose it because the title and the theme match what I am shooting for here.
I would also like to gratefully thank everyone that I've come into contact with here, you are all so positive and helpful, and there is a strong Fellowship here.

Thank you for checking out my 5-7-5 Suites.
I quit calling them Haiku Suites because haikus are designed in a certain way, and I do not believe this fits the format. I would appreciate any feedback you might have on this topic .

As I have not written in a while, I'm going to try to write at least two haikus a day and start entering more and taking advantage of the many benefits there are to Tom's great site.

     

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