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Thoughts About Love
: Memories by Bucketlist

Mother
Fills a birthright
Of love and true caring
With bonding and nurturing too
You gave me all that I needed to grow
And mature while I lived with you
Grateful for all you gave
Now that you're gone
Mother



Author Notes
The older I get, the more I realize how many babies do not get their birthrights supplied. I was lucky enough to have a wonderful mother.

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