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A Rhymed Whitney
NaPoWriMo 2019
: Calm Before The Storm by Debra White



Happy snap
of smiling kids,
just before
they hit the skids.
Ben fell first,
followed by Bex - 
I won't share what happened next!


 

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Author Notes
Nobody got hurt, but let's just say that our lovely day out ended there and then. Fortunately, we'd already enjoyed the ice-cream part!

A Whitney is a seven line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 respectively.

     

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