Excellent When a relationship looks like ending... Don't Go by Gypsymooncat Love writing prompt entry

Are you really going to leave? Can we talk on this some more? If you go I'll surely grieve and be lonesome evermore Can we talk on this some more? For I know I'll never mend and be lonesome evermore Please don't say it is the end For I know I'll never mend if I watch you walk away please don't say it is the end Can you give it one more day? If I watch you walk away; if you go I'll surely grieve Can you give it one more day? Are you really going to leave?   Writing Prompt Post a story, in rhyme about love. Any length, but must rhyme. Method of rhyme up to writer. Author Notes This is my first go at a Pantoum. The content is a bit "oft-flogged" and a bit cliche I know, but I decided to re-write the poem I'd originally posted here - and which was a contest entry - as I hated it! And thought...why not have a go at a different form of poetry? I hope it's okay! Thanks for reading!

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