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Pin Cushion by dragonpoet

Where is my knight errant
When I need him?

I have prayed for his help.
This is not a whim.

He needs to return to save
me from the pain

Of these many knives
That seem to rain

Down and delve
Deep inside me

He needs to remove them
to set me free

So I am no longer a pincushion
for others ills

Then each wound can heal
And I can still

Find a way to become whole
So he can claim my willing soul

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Author Notes
I have a question about lay out. Should I leave it as couplets or make it into abcb quatrains?

     

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