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A Sevenelle poem for Potlatch Poetry
A Dream? by damommy


I sailed across the milky way.
and rode a rainbow home today.
The sprinkled stars waved their goodbye,
the Old Man Moon just winked his eye
and watched as I went flying by.
I skidded ‘round those seven rings
as angels dipped their snowy wings.
 
The clouds had scattered on their way
to catch the wind to run and play.
How came to be this magic road
that took me places never strode
and all the wonders it bestowed?
I skidded ‘round those seven rings
as angels dipped their snowy wings.

 

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Author Notes
Sevenelle is a stanzaic invented form created by Virginia Noble which cannot only be found in 'Pathways' but is also in the Study and Writing of Poetry by Amy Jo Zook and Wauneta Hackleman, 1996.
The Sevenelle is:
- stanzaic, written in no less than 2 septets, each made up of a rhymed couplet, tercet and couplet in that order.
- metric, iambic tetrameter.
- rhymed, aabbbCC ddeeeCC etc.
- composed with L6&L7 of the first stanza repeated as refrain in the last 2 lines of all subsequent stanzas.

     

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