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Tanka (clumsy hands) by Sugarray77

The lonely old
awkwardly go on their way
clumsy, fumbling hands
no one nearby to see
their silent desperation 

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Tanka forms are normally written in 31 syllables are less in a short-long-short-long-long structure.

Please be encouraged to include elderly relatives and friends in your holiday celebrations... it is just as important to tend to our own .... as well as the needy.

     

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