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A Tanka poem
Tanka(pink commands the sky) by Pamusart

pink commands the sky
doesn't seem to match this scene
Oxymoron
sunflowers are way too bright
for a sunset sky

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Thank you for reading my poem

Sometimes I play with reality. This scene is impossible. There would not be bright fields of flowers under a sunset.

Painting by me. Sunflower Sunset. Oil on canvas

     

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