FanStory.com - Smuckatelly Strikes Againby Earl Corp
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Smuckatelly Strikes Again by Earl Corp
Dialogue Only Writing Contest contest entry

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.

Sgt Corp, can I ask you a question?

You just did Private Smuckatelly, but go ahead.

Would I get into trouble if I called Captain Brown an asshole?

You know you would, that's disrespectful and insubordinate. You'd be looking at jail time.

Okay, would I get into trouble for thinking Captain Brown's an asshole?

We can't control what you think, you know that Smuckatelly.

Ok ,cool! HEY, CAPTAIN BROWN, I THINK YOU"RE AN ASSHOLE

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Author Notes
Right hand to God this really happened at Fort Campbell, Kentucky. This is my first dialogue only piece, any advice is welcome.
You've all read other Smuckatelly stories I've written on here.

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