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What's the Point? by Amanda Carlucci
    Lonely Poem Contest Winner 

I tell my husband, this is what I need.
You're wrong, he replies, just be normal.
I tried.

I tell my stepson, this is what I need.
You're wrong, he replies, get over it.
I tried.

I tell my daughter, this is what I need.
You're wrong, she replies, no one needs that.
I cried.

I write in my journal; still no one hears.
There's no one left to tell.
This is all I need.

I post my needs publicly; my family is mad.
Hey! they replied, you should have told us.
I tried.


Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.
Lonely Poem
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