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Funny Honey
: I Love Loosie. by rhonnie69
Humorous relationship poem writing prompt entry
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

Sicky.
"Loosie...I'm home."

Lady Love.
"Oh, Sicky, my dear,
I've been waiting anxiously for you."

Sicky.
"I'm craving you too.
just like I always do."

Lady Love.
"Open your mouth, and close your eyes,
you're going to get, a golden surprise."

Sicky.
"Oh, loosie, how sweet of you.
I anticipate your treat I really do."

Lady Love.
"This is delicious, let's not waste it.
Take a bite, Sicky, you've got to taste it."

Sicky.
"CRUNCH!!!
Oh, Loosie, what a tasty lunch."

Lady Love.
"I thought you would like it,
'cause I had a hunch."

Sicky.
"Where you got it, God knows.
Not me 'cause you said, my eyes I should close.

Lady Love.
"Silly, Sickey...you got it from me.
And I got it from that central tree.

Sicky.
"Oooooooo Noooooooo.
Loosie, you didn't do it."

Lady Love.
"Yes. I did...and you too blew it."

Sicky.
Loosie, because you didn't obey so well.
Now we both gotta' go to..."

Lady Love.
"Hades."


Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type that looks at the funny side of relationships.

Author Notes
"I don't wanna' go."

     

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