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The loss of my daughter has left me grieving daily.
Sadness by Brigitte Elko
    Ditch it. Contest Winner 

Artwork by seshadri_sreenivasan at FanArtReview.com

Sadness

The tear streaming,

ditch it.

Sadness

The feeling of emptiness,

ditch it.

Sadness

The quivering stomach,

ditch it.

Sadness

The unsettling vision of her,

ditch it.

Sadness

The streaming brain feed,

ditch it.

Sadness

Trembling lip,

ditch it.

Sadness

The cavernous loss,

ditch it.

Sadness

ditch it to live.

I mourn.

Sadness


Writing Prompt
Choose an emotion that you would like dispose of and describe it. Any form of poetry will do. And please keep it clean.
Ditch it.
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Author Notes
My recent tragic loss has left me gasping for breath. Sadness pervades my world every minute of the day.
Thank you for this image seshadri_screenivasan, Jesus is the perfecter of faith. Faith is what will get me through this tragic loss.

     

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