Excellent minimalist free verse Natural Light : brushstrokes by estory

Empty white canvas An empty white canvas streaked with An empty white canvas streaked with brushstrokes Across an empty white canvas streaked with brushstrokes of colors Brushstrokes of colors Brushstrokes of colors becoming petals Within brushstrokes of colors becoming petals of flowers Opening up across an empty white canvas Of brushstrokes of colors Brushstrokes of raindrops Raindrops on flower petals An artist dreaming of raindrops on flower petals Author Notes In this piece, I tried to create an effect of the painting gradually emerging out of an artist's imagination, brushstroke by brushstroke, capturing this moment of raindrops on flower petals. It's somewhat an exploration of the idea of creating music in language by using repetition of phrases and words rather than rhyme, and the imagery is very deliberately sensual, almost oriental. estory

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