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Alliterisen poem for Potlatch
The Whippoorwill by damommy

I hear the whistling whippoorwill
His well-loved spot is on my window sill.
Each nighttime brought him nearer,
the panes provided him a mirror.
I never met his mate
who seemingly is too sedate
to answer with an ardent trill.

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Sequence #1

1st line- 8 syllables
2nd line- 10 syllables
3rd line- 7 syllables
4th line- 9 syllables
5th line- 6 syllables
6th line- 8 syllables
7th line- 8 syllables (same as first)

The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. For example: Glorious Graves, and wonderful waves. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds.

     

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