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haiku (wishes float) by Val Crisson
Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry

wishes float
down a mossy well
penny each

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Author Notes
I feel a real haiku has word economy. So my haiku is 3/5/3, which is totally correct if one reads the rules of haiku. haiku should have 17 syllables or less, and should read short/long/short. Please check the rules on this contest, before saying it has to be a 5/7/5 syllable count.

     

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