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Origami haiku sequence
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: Arethusa Falls by estory

White water spirit
An old song of renewal
Speaks to me

Alone in the woods
Where memories are buried
New firs sprout

White water spirit
Born out of the dark, cold rock
Releases

Into the clear sky
On the wings of an eagle
Where we climb

This turbulent stream
The birth of a bright angel
This morning

Author Notes
The Origami haiku is one of my own inventions. Basically, it is a traditional haiku in meter except for the last line, which has only three syllables. I wanted to throw the stanzas just a little off balance. I like doing them in sequences dripping into each other, linked by a common thread of meditation. The natural image and epiphany moment from traditional haiku stay. In this case, the poem was inspired by a hike to Arethusa Falls in the White Mountains of New Hampshire. The image of the waterfall, the deeply rooted fir trees around it, and the birds, speak here of accumulated memories lost, hopes for the future, renewal of spirit, transformation through experience and struggle. estory

     

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