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A father's Love for his lost Son.
"The Gift of Life II"
: If, I Was With U? by Ricky1024

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Follows with this amazing poem or story...
"Once Again I With Upon Your Star Jay"

"If, I Was With U?"
Written on December 9th, 2017
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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"As this year's Snows...
"Slowly coat the ground below...
"I so wish things could be!"
"Not so...
...
"I do wish to thee...
"That You Jay could be here...
"This Christmas with me...
"I so, with You, wish God could see...
"And, bring You Jay, back to me, this *Day?"
"And, I so with that You, could see, all the changes...
"That have taken place...
"Since, *Thee...
...
"To see...
"The beauty of this year's Snows...
"To see the beauty as the ground is coated with a beautiful coat of Wintern's Snow...
...
"I So wish things could not be...
"Not so...
"And, if I was with You...
"I'd build You a Beautiful Snow Man...
"Like I used to do!"
...
"If, I was with You, Jay...
"I'd take You sledding...
"Each and Every day...
...
"If, I was wirh You, Jay...
"I would let you skip school...
"Each and Every day!"
"And lastly...
"If I Was With You...
"For one last thing...
"Before I die...
"I would tell You above...
"How much I Miss You...
"And, How Much I Love...
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Approximate Word Count 209.






Author Notes
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and his son Jesus the Christ, FanStory and Tom the Administrator, Fan Art Review, this amazing and talented artist and writer, Ricky 1024 and his wonderful picture...
"Just Jay."

     

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