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seagulls circle by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
seagulls circle 
above old Amtrak station--
destination unknown


 

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Author Notes
This haiku is based on an observation I made from my living room window. The syllable count is 17 syllables and it doesn't have to be 5/7/5. English syllables are different than Japanese syllables so the rule doesn't apply. It just has to be 17 syllables or less.

The kigo is summer (source: http://www.ahapoetry.com/aadoh/suanim.htm)

     

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