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a story inspired by Pierre-Auguste Renoir
Lovely Flowers by RodG
    100 Word Story Contest Winner 

In dark blue mourning clothes, she'd stroll by my garden every day. Today she stopped.

"Your flowers are magnificent . . . such sweet perfume!" Her cheeks flushed pink.

I arose, brushed damp loam from my knees, and smiled. "Merci beaucoup."

"You are a fine gardener. The owner must be proud."

I laughed. "I am both, but can't resist beauty on days like this. May I offer you this perfect rose, Madame?"

She frowned. "You flirt with a--a widow, sir!"

"No, a lonely man gives a lovely woman a rose, hoping she'll return for more . . . someday."

She smiled. "Yes, Monsieur, it's possible."


Writing Prompt
Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.
100 Word Story
Contest Winner

Recognized

Author Notes
The painting is "Picking Flowers" by Pierre-Auguste Renoir.

The French words I chose (to fit the context of the painting/story) are well known. I trust I do not have to translate.

WORD COUNT: 100 Apple Pages

     

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