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Etheree Poem - (2nd Place)
~ Red Carp ~ by PoemsOfDD
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~  Red Carp ~
 

Pond's
surface
ruffled by
tiny movements

from red carp stirring
water as they dart and
flee, chasing and escaping
from one another while playing
hide and seek amongst water lilies.
I smile and watch, counting their bubbles 
pop.

 
 
   

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Author Notes
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem.

     

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