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Only One Was Talking
If I Had Only Listened by LoannaLois
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We danced 'til all the music died
I thought I was your queen
I said we'd make new plans and dreams
Our future; I had seen.

But as we talked, I realized,
I heard but just one voice.
I wondered, also, how it was
That it had been my choice!

Suddenly, it came to me
So simply making sense:
I was doin' all the talkin'
While you just walked the fence.

If I had only listened
When I heard no sound from you,
If I had only listened
I'd have known that we were through.

Suddenly, it came to me
So simply making sense:
I was doin' all the talkin'
While you just walked the fence.


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Author Notes
I like writing lyrics, but I have to tape the music I hear in my head.
I can't read music very well.

     

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