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My Book of Poems 2010-2017
: The Good News by Mustang Patty
Loop Poetry Contest contest entry

Today, just another day,
Day one to spread the good news,
News to share out on the streets,
Streets that wear out your new shoes.
 
Time to shout and speak of Him,
Him, so worthy of our praise,
Praise the one and true Savior,
Savior, to whom our hands raise.
 
His voice speaks soft and gentle,
Gentle is His warm embrace,
Embrace His love, given free,
Free from sin, without a trace.

 

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Author Notes
thank you Google images

(from shadowpoetry.com) Loop Poetry is a poetry form created by Hellon. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, last word of line 3 becomes the first word of line 4. This is followed for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is abcb.

I chose to customize my loop poem within the guidelines, and it has the following scheme;
Three stanzas of four lines each
Each line has seven syllables
Rhyme scheme abcb within each stanza

     

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