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Haiku Club Challenge # 14 autumn
Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
: haiku (amber twilight) by Gypsy Blue Rose




amber twilight

permeates our goodbye—

uncertainty
 





 

Author Notes
Every Sunday I post a new haiku club challenge at the forum's challenge room. The Haiku Club and the multi-author book is for everyone who enjoys writing and reading haiku. If you would like to add your haiku to this book, just click on add chapter. You keep a copy in your portfolio and you keep all reviews as normal. All haiku in this book are eligible to be selected for an anthology that will be published on Amazon this year. If you have questions, please contact me.

Haiku is a short Japanese poetry form about nature and written in less than 17 syllables.

If you have a hard time reviewing haiku, these are a few ideas....

How is the presentation? Are line one and two grammatically connected? Does it bring memories? What is the season? How many syllables? Is it insightful or does it make you ponder?

     

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