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My Book of Poems 2010-2017
: The Dark by Mustang Patty

Darkness
Overcomes me
My heart is filled with dread
Little comfort, no end in sight
Is it too much to ask for just some light?
Clouds came in blocking the bright sun
Cold heart filled with sadness
Alone in the
Darkness

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THE RICTAMETER POEM FORM

A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2 with the last line's word/s identical to the first line (Rhyming not needed)

     

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