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A Mirror Cinquain
Little Poems
: Sunrise by Treischel



Sunrise,
Tendrils of light
Across the horizon,
Spreading glow that glitters golden
In skies.

My eyes,
Drinking in the morning glimmer
As the waters shimmer,
Behold the bright
Sunrise



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Author Notes
On Father's Day, I got up early to go fishing with my son-in-law and grandson. I captured the sunrise from the shore.

This poem is a Mirror Cinquain
A Cinquain is a five line poem. The format, inspired by Adelaide Crapsey in 1915, has a fixed syllable count of: 2,4,6,8,2. Rhyming is optional.
A Reverse Cinquain has the opposite syllable count of: 2,8,6,4,2.
A Mirror Cinquain is a combination of both the Cinquain and the Reverse Cinquain. So there are two stanzas with the following syllable count: 2,4,6,8,2 2,8,6,4,2. This gives a balanced pattern that is pleasing.

For this poem, I chose to use rhyme. The rhyme scheme is:
Abcca addbA, where the capital letters indicated a repeated line.

This picture was taken by the author himself at Grey Cloud Island on the Mississippi River near St. Paul Park, Minnesota, on June 21, 2015.

     

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