Exceptional A 12 Line Exhortation Little Poems : Do Well by Treischel

Do well. In what you do, do thoroughly. Become the best that you can be. Express your creativity. Let deeds foretell. Then you'll excel. Have every given task you touch, Exemplify the best. As such, Appreciated very much. To reach the top, Don't ever stop. Do well! Author Notes I find that those who continue to strive to do the best usually come out on top. Here my grandson, Jeremy, is striving to do just that. This poem is a 12 Line Exhortation. A 12 Line Exhortation is a format that I created. It is a poem with 12 lines, starting and ending with a 2 syllable line that caries an exhortation, like; Get up!, Move on! Go jump! The whole syllable structure is: 2/8/8/8/4/4/8/8/8/4/4/2. There is also a fixed rhyme scheme of: AbbbaacccddA, where the capital letters are repeated lines. I researched poetry types with 12 Lines to see what they are called. I found a group of poems called 12 Lines. But they are basically unstructured. I wanted some specific structure. I wanted a poem with 3 consecutive lines of rhyme, that played off 8/4/2 syllable counts and was positive in spirit. So I created this format and called it 12 Line Exhortation. I don't think this format previously exists, as far as I know. This photograph was taken by the author himself in September of 2014.

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