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A 12 Line Exhortation
Little Poems
: Find Joy by Treischel



Find Joy!
Enjoy the finer things of life.
Reduce and minimize the strife.
The opportunities are rife
For doing well.
So cast a spell,
And see the chances that arise,
They're sitting right before your eyes --
The simple things the world supplies
When you step out,
And look about.
Find Joy!




Author Notes
Yes, get out there and enjoy life.

This poem is a 12 Line Exhortation.
This poem is a 12 Line Exhortation, a format that I created. A 12 Line Exhortation is a poem with 12 lines, starting and ending with a 2 syllable line that caries an exhortation, like; Get up!, Move on! Go jump! The whole syllable structure is:
2/8/8/8/4/4/8/8/8/4/4/2.
There is also a fixed rhyme scheme of:
AbbbaacccddA, where the capital letters are repeated lines.

I researched poetry types with 12 Lines to see what they are called. I found a group of poems called 12 Lines. But they are basically unstructured. I wanted some specific structure. I wanted a poem with 3 consecutive lines of rhyme, that played off 8/4/2 syllable counts and was positive in spirit. So I created this format and called it 12 Line Exhortation. I don't think this format previously exists, as far as I know.

This photograph was taken by the author himself diuring a scarecrow exhibit at the Minnesota Arboretum located in Chanhassen, on Octrober 16, 2014.

     

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