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: Little Geese by Treischel
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Little Geese,
adorned in yellow fleece,
drift upon the pond in perfect peace,
to become new generation of grownup geese.
Tiny legs in motion never cease.
How fast their size increase,
little geese.

Swim behind,
as geese are so inclined,
with their dad and momma on their mind.
They are content to drift and play, and stay behind,
although not inclined to keep aligned.
Little geese, thus confined,
swim behind.





Author Notes
Baby Geese swim behind their parents on a tranquil pond.

Mono-rhymed stanzas.
Rhyme Scheme: AaaA1aaA

Author's photograph.

     

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