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Mister Expert Explorer by michaelcahill
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Caught, in a sea cave!
 
My foot wedged between rocks. The tide is talking now.
 
Entrance … under water.
 
How high will it rise? If I remained trapped … over my head.
 
I'm guessing there'll be air pockets.
 
I'm free! Water leveling off … two feet to spare.

Breathing normally ... I'm okay.

SHARK!

 


 


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Can you tell a complete story to thrill or frighten in fifty words or less?
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Author Notes

Word count 50 by hand.
Please feel free to offer instructions on how to indicate pauses. I'm not sure if I'm using elipses properly. Maybe I need some dashes? :))

     

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