Excellent A Sonnet Family : Sorrow by Treischel

I feel the sorrow deep within my veins, That flows so slow with stresses and the strains. I worry that the pain may never heal. So I must kneel, to God make an appeal. The loss of someone meaningful to me, Can sap the soul of all vitality, To spread a dreadful darkness deep within. Such bitterness must surely be a sin. But I shall carry on with all my might, And hope someday that I will see the light. I feel an angel near, holding my hand. Although I find it hard to I understand. So I shall shed all my tart tears today. I'll find my happiness another day. Author Notes With my wife's mother passing away, I felt these thoughts emanating through her as she dealt with her grief. This poem just materialized effortlessly in minutes as if my Muse was controlling the pen. This poem is a Sonnet. I was going to post it in the Sonnet contest, but the rules required an abab rhyme scheme. I wrote this in an aabb scheme. So, I just decided to post it here instead. I must thank Alveria for the use of her picture, Deep Sorrow, from Fanart Review.

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