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A Trinet Poem
Little Poems
: Ancient Trails by Treischel

Ancient Trails
(A Trinet Poem)





Ancient trails
Lizard tails
Extinct creatures that lived and died
Upon old Earth these beasts preside
Brutal brawn
Past Eon
Now gone



Amazing size
Callous cries
Threats will arise when prey surprised
Overcome by Raptor pair so undersized
Numbers prevail
Critters assail
Fangs impale



Now today
On display
We view this bygone hunt tableau
To imagine events from long ago
People saw
Dropped jaw
Total awe





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Author Notes
I took my grandson to see the dinosaur exhibit at the Minneapolis Convention Center in December, 2012. They had several animatronic displays. It was fun and impressive. This poem is inspired by this photograph of one of the exhibits of two Raptors attacking a Saurolophus.


This poem is a Trinet.
A Trinet is a type of poem that keys off of word count rather than syllable count. It is written with the following format: first two lines have two words, the next two lines have six words, the final three lines have two words each. So, the Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:

Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 words

Repeat this pattern 2 more times (Thus the Tri or three requirement), if centered correctly it provides visual impact.
There is no requirement to rhyme or for meter, but I thought this layout begs for the following rhyme scheme that I used here of:
aabbccc.

This photograph was taken by the author himself.

     

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