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Day 8 a Tanka for National Poetry Month
An April shower of Poems
: tanka (Morning has broken) by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

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Morning has broken
Mountains clothed in fine white mist
Waiting for the Sun
Beams of brightness fog will lift
April day has just begun



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Thanks to Anna4054 for the lovely morning fog artistry.

This Tanka has 5 lines..5-7-5-7-7 syllables respectively adding up to 31 syllables . all tanka are 5 lines and 31 syllables or less. No title is necessary but if required should bear the first line of the poem. Thanks to Debbie for the excellent information regarding this interesting form. :-) Carolyn

     

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