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A Whitney Poem
Little Poems
: Twighlight Toasting by Treischel

Twilight Toasting
(A Whitney Poem)




Dance and play
The day away
Cherubs sing
As angels may
Wine tasting
Twilight toasting
Dusk's revelries underway




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Author Notes
As the sun goes down, after a day of play, the cherubs gather to toast the sunset.

This poem is a Whitney.
A Whitney has a fixed syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 in 7 lines.
There is no required rhyme scheme, but I added one of:
aababba.

This photograph was taken by the author himself at the Lake Harriet Rose Garden of Minneapolis in August, 2013.

     

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