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Cinquains 3
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: Can it Be? by Treischel

Can it be?
(Cinquains - 3)




Oh Joy!
Awake and fine
Skills that doctors employ
With just a touch of the Divine
She's mine!

I'm awed.
Modern med'cine
truly deserves applaud,
as my wife's healing has begun.
Praise God!

And if
it all goes well,
she can finally say goodbye
to all her years of chronic hell,
I'll cry.




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Author Notes
Call me a cry baby, but I will.

This poem is a set of Cinquains.
A Cinquain is written using a pattern. "Cinq" [pronounced SINK] is French for the number 5. This type of poem only has five lines. Each line follows a specific pattern.
The traditional Cinquain, as developed by Adelaide Crapsey, has five lines and a strict structure based on syllable count.
Line 1: Two syllables
Line 2: Four syllables
Line 3: Six syllables
Line 4: Eight syllables
Line 5: Two syllables
There is no required rhyme scheme.

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