FanStory.com - Another Day Doneby Treischel
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
An Eleven77 Poem
Little Poems
: Another Day Done by Treischel

Another Day Done
(An Eleven77 Poem)




A Setting Sun
As each evening comes
Goes down

All cars once parked
By pavilion's path
Are gone

The fallen leaves
Reveal limbs stretched to
The sky

As little breeze
Through the barren trees
Moves on

Another day
That has slipped away
Is done

The time of day
Darkened sky gives out
A sigh

As night draws nigh
Setting sun says last
Goodbye


Recognized

Author Notes
The sun set on another day at the picnic pavilion.

This poem is an Eleven77 which is a poem form created by an Australian Fanstorian poet: GarthL

It consists of seven stanzas each with a specific syllable count of 4, 5, 2. Last word of successive stanzas rhyme, to create an overall rhyme scheme with each other.

Each stanza thereby has 11 syllables across 7 stanzas equaling to 77 syllables in total, hence an Eleven77.

This photograph was taken by the author at Mounds Park in St. Paul, Minnesota in May, 2011.

     

© Copyright 2024. Treischel All rights reserved.
Treischel has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.




Be sure to go online at FanStory.com to comment on this.
© 2000-2024. FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement