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HAILEZAINE(Haiku-Triplet-Quinzaine)
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: hailezaine (trail tale) by Treischel

Trail Tale
(A Hailezaine[Haiku-Triplet-Quinzaine] poem)




exiting dark shady vale
horses on the trail
swish their tail


Author Notes
I noted this format when I was reviewing, and found that there was a writing prompt for it. Too late to enter, I'm intrigued. So here is my attempt at one.

This poem in a Hailezaine formatted poem).
A HAILEZAINE must be written in three lines.
It has the syllable count of a Quinzaine (verse of 15 syllables divided in three lines) as 7/5/3, and rhyming scheme of aaa, like a Triplet and content of a Haiku. Lack of punctuation and capitalization is characteristic of a Haiku. Thus the name is an amalgamation of all three.

The picture is a photograph I took last weekend, 7/20 to be exact, while out and about. Two unknown female riders passed me on the trail.

     

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