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Traveling about the Country
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: Trips by Treischel

Trips
(A Cinquain Suite)




I rode
Upon metal
Wings that soon swiftly strode
Marshmallow clouds, then to settle
The load.

The states
Below drift by
Lonely landmark relates
Places people choose to apply
Their fates

Time zones
Changes reference
That seeps about my bones.
I seek to know the difference
To home's

To see
Exotic spots
Around our big country
Are perfect photographic shots
To me

But it
Also relaxes
Daily care caught culprit
That causes the stress that taxes
Spirit

But then,
What's also good,
It's understood, is when
I'll be back in my neighborhood
Again.



Author Notes
Just got back from a trip. Vegas, Atlanta, and back to Minnesota. Hit Pacific, East, and Central time Zones. Glad to be back in my own bed.

Picture is from Author's own collection.

     

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