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a Gertuu Poem about the Seasons
Little Poems
: Season's Go Round by Treischel

Season Go Round
(A Gertuu Poem)

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Seasons go round
Carousel
Changing fast

Pretty horses
Going up
And then down

There is Winter
The blue one
Flying past

Then a wet Spring
Comes in sight
Colored brown

Sizzling Summer's
Red hot ride
Is so bold

Then the peacock
Autumn comes
Feathered gold

They swing around
Then come back
Once again

Season's cycle
Carousel
Now, and then

Recognized

Author Notes
I think the seasons are like a Merry-go-round. They go round and round and up and down.

This is a Gertuu Poem.
This is a new format style created by 'Gert Sherwood', fondly called the 'Gertuu' (double 'u'). It has a 4-3-3 syllable count of any number of stanzas.
The merit of this style is that many poets preferred short phrases and words within each line, making the poem very 'punchy' and 'striking' writings.
Good for writing 'rhetoric' or 'slogan shouting' poems.

Photo is the Poets

     

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