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a Gertuu Poem about the Seasons
Little Poems
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Season's Go Round
by Treischel
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Season Go Round
(A Gertuu Poem)
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Seasons go round
Carousel
Changing fast
Pretty horses
Going up
And then down
There is Winter
The blue one
Flying past
Then a wet Spring
Comes in sight
Colored brown
Sizzling Summer's
Red hot ride
Is so bold
Then the peacock
Autumn comes
Feathered gold
They swing around
Then come back
Once again
Season's cycle
Carousel
Now, and then
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Author Notes
I think the seasons are like a Merry-go-round. They go round and round and up and down.
This is a Gertuu Poem.
This is a new format style created by 'Gert Sherwood', fondly called the 'Gertuu' (double 'u'). It has a 4-3-3 syllable count of any number of stanzas.
The merit of this style is that many poets preferred short phrases and words within each line, making the poem very 'punchy' and 'striking' writings.
Good for writing 'rhetoric' or 'slogan shouting' poems.
Photo is the Poets
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