JUST GO
Go
be free.
You can see
the world before
you lose youth's early key,
as all life's problems close the door
with work, wife and kids, making things a chore.
Later, when we know, and have all our ducks in row,
seeking the big change, couple hits the floor,
heads for that longed-for shining shore.
At last, we're now ready!
World don't ignore.
Finally Free!
So, we
Go.
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Author Notes
The best times in life to see the world, are either while young before you're tied down, or after you retire.
This poem is a Diatelle.
A diatelle has a set syllable count and a set rhyme.
The syllable count is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1,
The rhyme pattern is: abbcbccaccbcbba.It is usually displayed centered.
The photograph is mine. It's meant to convey traveling at the sunset of your life.
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