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Psalm in Lexibridge format
Psalms for the Journey
: Psalm for Those Who Question by Rdfrdmom2
Faith Poetry Contest contest entry

I do not know
nor do I comprehend
the depths of the amazing

love

given freely
no matter the reason
I come stumbling to You;

would

understanding
change my approach to You,
have me believing I could

change

things on a whim,
adversely affecting
those daring to block my way ~

the

awesome power
would likely corrupt me;
responsibility for

world

peace belonging
to those who can discern
reason from theology;

why

do mere mortals
spend time debating false
evidence against Jesus,

not

even taking
time to appreciate
the wonders of creation?

start

believing in
the Creator who gave
this creation the things we

now

take for granted;
how arrogant we are ~
trying to make You like us.

jbh
7-12-12

Message within the poem: "Love would change the world; why not start now?"


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Author Notes
A special thanks to Sange for the use of "Questionable Sunset Sky" to enhance this work. See the ? in the sky? thanks for reading. love, jan

Lexibridge Format: (Invented by Rdfrdmom2)

Line 1: 4 syllables
Line 2: 6 syllables
Line 3: 7 syllables

Bridge

Repeat format
*A bridge may show above the opening line as well as after the last line according to the wishes of the writer.
**The bridge may connect and form a message of its own but it is not a requirement of the format.
***Poem should include at least 3 sets of the three line format

     

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