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Cannot believe the departure of the dear,they go;
Waiting by Jahnavi Janu
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry

All I thought you came
You came and took off something
Still wonder you came

Author Notes
It is a 5-7-5 in English.A Haiku which encarves meanings in 5-7-5 lines a deep emotion for the waiting for the dear and the feel of not accepting the reality that the dear has left you physically but the feel lingers...

     

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