FanStory.com - Awkwardby DonandVicki
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Awkward by DonandVicki
Dialogue Only Writing Contest contest entry

"You brought me here to our favorite restaurant to ask me for a divorce? ARE YOU SERIOUS?"

"Shhhh! Keep your voice down, people are starting to stare."

"Is that what you're worried about, people staring?"

"It's me, not you."

"You gutless wonder, you brought me here thinking I wouldn't create a scene."

"Waiter, could I get the check?"

"That's right, you jerk, you get your wallet out."


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Author Notes
It is very interesting, about 75% of the reviewers so far thought that the woman started the conversation and 25% thought that the man initiated the dialogue. I find this very fascinating. I intended that the woman was being dumped and I am glad that I left it ambiguous. How do you feel?

     

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