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Yabba Dabba Doo! Shelley's Back! by jim vecchio

Where does Shelley go?
When Shelley goes away, where does she go?
And this time she stayed away much too long
Does Shelley even know my inner woe
Did she even miss my poetic song?

How can I learn from the Master Poet of FanStory fame?
When Shelley is not there, I’ll shed a tear
There is no one to point out my faults
No one to correct the words I hold dear
Then my words just end up in empty vaults

Please, O Shelley, please show me the way to write as good as you
You are so missed when you’re gone, my words ever will ring true

Author Notes
The YABBA DABBA DO was created by Havyk Dementius of Allpoetry

It is syllabic with three stanzas of two quintets and a rhyming couplet:

syllable count is:
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