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As the Planet Revolves by Bill Schott
50 Word Flash writing prompt entry

Dale looked across the room and saw his wife wrapped in the arms of her lover Gil.

"I hope I'm not interrupting," he said.

Gil looked back, smiling, as Dale’s wife pushed away from her companion.

“Interrupting what?” she asked.

Revealing a revolver, Dale replied, “Why, Gil’s last unventilated moments.”



 


Writing Prompt
Can you write a complete story with only 50 words? That's the challenge of this writing contest.

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