- Riding the Sea Breezeby Gypsy Blue Rose
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Jiyu-shi Poem for the Japanese Poetry Club
Tanka Collection
: Riding the Sea Breeze by Gypsy Blue Rose
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Old Spice rides sea breeze

      entwined in musk sandalwood

allures my heart

      and stirs tempestuous lust

yearning for your touch

      my body leaning towards yours

millennium dance

      making love with you at dusk


Author Notes
Jiyu-shi is a modern Japanese free-style poetic form developed in Japan in the 19th century. The form consists of 5/7 stanza, you may write one or more stanzas = source

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