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One Thousand Cranes
: Silver Moonlight by Gypsy Blue Rose
for rules and information, please check my author notes

 
 
silver moonlight
slips through window blinds—
dust's spotlight

 
 

 

Author Notes
Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry made of short, unrhymed lines that evoke natural imagery. The haiku gives a moment of insight based on observation.

Japanese haiku are written in 3 lines with 5/7/5 syllables form. In English is 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS due to the difference between Japanese and English syllables.

haiku contains two separate parts:

A section that creates an image (often the first two lines, but not always)

Then another section that is different but connected perhaps suggests an interpretation of the first image, perhaps suggesting a contrast.

Haiku should be clear and direct, with strong images in a compact and concise manner.


for haiku rules click here - modern Haiku rules

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

     

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