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A Potlatch Poetry Club entry
Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
: Snow Bound by JLR
Artwork by meg119 at FanArtReview.com

I think the days peel off too fast these years
the snow piles deep, my aching back aches is real

It seems I need to wipe away more tears
like when the thoughts of my youth make me squeal.
The loss of strength and vim and pep is felt.
I look with hope and pray the snow to melt.
For sure, the days of milk and bread are few
the cat needs food; we need meat for hot stew!

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Author Notes
A Rispetto, an Italian form of poetry, is a complete poem of Two rhyme quatrains (4 pines) with Strict Meter. Rhyme scheme of abab ccdd.
A Heroic Rispetto is written in Iambic pentameter, usually featuring the same rhyme scheme.

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