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A social commentary.
Awkward conversations by Jesse James Doty

Staccato chatter
Rising to a fevered pitch
Catastrophic climax
Release--then relax into a heap

Conversational letdown
When two friends meet
With only a little time before
Someone needs to leave

Happenstance revival
Of each other's knowledge
Each time they get together
Awareness gathers dust

Sarcastic mindfulness
Forgetting who we are
Clamoring to aspire to greatness
In hopes of leaving
the awkwardness behind


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Author Notes
This came from a conversation with a close friend. After a half-hour, we realized we had to get on with life. Then, when we attempted to continue where we had left off, we found it awkward. We didn't share how we felt at the time. This poem came as a result of that marvelous conversation that didn't end well.
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